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Dorothy Albertini's avatar

Hi Adam!

1: c

2: I like digging in with Reid and the balance felt right to me

3: yeah!

4: Clinton is so much more remote and disconnected feeling in NY (in my imagination) than Kingston — I think it should be Clinton

5 I wasn’t surprised. It ended around when it felt like it was about to.

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Adam Snyder's avatar

Thanks so much Dorothy, big help!

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Patrick Farr's avatar

Hi Adam, I have just finished reading this as I am travelling home from being on tour and I loved it!

Here are my comments:

1. c).

2. I like seeing the story from the points of view of the other characters.

4. Clinton!

5. I was a bit surprised at the ending, but that's good.

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Adam Snyder's avatar

This is great, thanks so much Paddy! Welcome back from your tour, get some rest!

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J.K. Ghillis's avatar

Here are the only answers I could think of:

1 – c) It should feel uncertain whether the supernatural is real or imagined – and it does, to me

2 – more Reid

4 – Clinton is good

5 – Were you surprised when it ended? – Yes.

Would it have been less surprising if it were in book form so you knew it was coming? – Hard to say, but probably less.

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Adam Snyder's avatar

Thanks JK, super helpful!

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