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Dec 23, 2023Liked by Adam Snyder

Noooooooooo .....

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Hang in there, it will make sense (I think)

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Dec 23, 2023Liked by Adam Snyder

It already makes sense. I just had a little crush on Ken ... ☹️

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Sorry!

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Dec 23, 2023Liked by Adam Snyder

Okay--I didn't want Ken to die...

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I didn't either. As a plot point, it becomes an important part of, not just the mystery, but of Timothy's challenge to figure out how/if he can stand up for something that he's trying to conceal. Still tragic.

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Dec 22, 2023Liked by Adam Snyder

“He could take off his sneakers, but from previous experience he knew the stream bed sometimes had bits of broken glass in it. “

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This is true. The rocks were also slimy.

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Dec 22, 2023Liked by Adam Snyder

I’m loving the suspense!

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Glad to hear it is suspending you! :-)

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This is a proper '70s Paranoid Conspiracy Thriller now. Excellent!

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Rolling into J von K territory, thanks for sticking with it!

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deletedDec 21, 2023Liked by Adam Snyder
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Yes, he's off to the races now, thanks Caroline!

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