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Paddle-to-the-Sea! So many great atmospheric details!

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Dec 9, 2023Liked by Adam Snyder

I live in the green apartment

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Toxins in the brook and Timothy's first cigarette. Brilliant.

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Dec 7, 2023Liked by Adam Snyder

I just read 3 and 4 together, and I get a sense that the town is a character. Here, at the end of Ch. 4, I'm afraid (for Timothy) of Mr. Owen)

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Dec 7, 2023Liked by Adam Snyder

The plot is foamier and foamier. I knew that green foam was coming back! It is a cliff hanger!

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Dec 6, 2023Liked by Adam Snyder

the plot thickens!!!

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