Kingston 76
The quality of your prose, story and dry wit are taking over, so as I read I’m thinking less, “what an excellent story by my brother-in-law,” and more like, “what an excellent story.”
Thanks bro! <3
especially senior. citizens!!!
Now that I have experienced those blue slate sidewalks, I am thinking how those in the Hudson Valley must appreciate reading your story.
This is why Kingstonians often tend to walk in the street!
Fun to think back on life before my hp copier!
Timothy called their car the Calico Chrysler, in honor of his cat, who actually had a better paint job.
very clever--Timothy's inner monologue is fun to follow.
I used to like 1st person better for internal monologue, but when you hover close enough I guess you can make it work with 3rd person too.
Love reading this even more than the first chapter. I especially love his fleeting thought of sharing about the prostitute. Made me laugh.
Lunchroom conversation starter 2.0!
“Then, there was Timothy’s porch.”
This is getting funnier and funnier!
I am loving the chapter installments.
Thanks Em! And the porch is getting messier and messier!
I noticed, so funny
loving the nostalgic details!
Ah, the plot properly thickens... Rustoleum and a lady of the night - in broad daylight. It's a delight.
Thanks Jarek! Yes, Rustoleum is an excellent thickening agent...
Thanks Caroline for continuing, stay tuned!
The quality of your prose, story and dry wit are taking over, so as I read I’m thinking less, “what an excellent story by my brother-in-law,” and more like, “what an excellent story.”
Thanks bro! <3
especially senior. citizens!!!
Now that I have experienced those blue slate sidewalks, I am thinking how those in the Hudson Valley must appreciate reading your story.
This is why Kingstonians often tend to walk in the street!
Fun to think back on life before my hp copier!
Timothy called their car the Calico Chrysler, in honor of his cat, who actually had a better paint job.
very clever--Timothy's inner monologue is fun to follow.
I used to like 1st person better for internal monologue, but when you hover close enough I guess you can make it work with 3rd person too.
Love reading this even more than the first chapter. I especially love his fleeting thought of sharing about the prostitute. Made me laugh.
Lunchroom conversation starter 2.0!
“Then, there was Timothy’s porch.”
This is getting funnier and funnier!
I am loving the chapter installments.
Thanks Em! And the porch is getting messier and messier!
I noticed, so funny
loving the nostalgic details!
Ah, the plot properly thickens... Rustoleum and a lady of the night - in broad daylight. It's a delight.
Thanks Jarek! Yes, Rustoleum is an excellent thickening agent...
Thanks Caroline for continuing, stay tuned!