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Feb 16Liked by Adam Snyder

That definitely was confusing.

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Which part?

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Feb 16Liked by Adam Snyder

I was referencing your character’s reaction to the self defense interaction! It was a great ending to that scene. Writing was not confusing at all!

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Righto!

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Nacho cheese flavored Doritos as a snack for the self-defence class. You convey the flavor of those days flawlessly.

Now I'm secretly hoping for a Bruce Lee cameo...

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No Bruce Lee in this one, but an uptick in action to be sure, and more period snack food...

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Jan 25Liked by Adam Snyder

I like the shadow-boxing scene (Led Zep in the background)

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Thanks Deb, I actually rewrote that particular scene just before posting, glad I did!

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Jan 24Liked by Adam Snyder

Fly, Timmy-Bird! Fly!

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Onwards & upwards!

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